Fixing my inquirer post

A few month ago I make a post about inquiry. but the post has so many mistake, here the post.

I was curios about how internet has invented. because I'm thinking how big Internet be, like they can access to billion people around the world. I've been curios since i am 10 years old, the internet make me interesting because internet have many application for the people around the world. it have (Skype, Facebook, Twiter, etc).
I have been curious about the Internet because I am confuse how internet can feed billion of application but people can access that application in the same time. I also curios about how the application can save all the information/the document, did they have an building to save the documents? did ?did the Internet use an cable to connect all the information around the world?
my effort to know is by doing research in the internet to found how Internet has been invented, or I found in the article.

Now after six month I learn about grammar I fix the post and I make this movie.

this is the post after I fix it.

I was curious about how Internet has invented. I'm thinking how big Internet be. People can access to other people around the world. I've been curious since I am 10 years old, the Internet make me interesting because Internet has many applications for the people around the world. It consists of  (Skype, Facebook, Twiter, etc).

I have been curious about the Internet because I am confuse how internet can feed billion of application, but people can access that application in the same time. I also curios about how the application can save the entire information. Did they have a building to save the documents? Did? Did the Internet use a cable to connect all the information around the world?

My effort to know is by doing research in the Internet to found how Internet has been invented, or I found in the article.

Poetry Book

Hi,
In the English class after we learn about poetry now this is the time to make a book of poetry. first I make five poems then I stick it together in one document. the next step is I must find 5 Famous Poems in the internet consisting of Poem about nature, Mother tongue Poems, Scary poems, Haiku Poems, and Funny Poems. 
Poetry 2

Adverb

Hello
this is my new video about adverb please enjoy!

Verb Movies

Hi,
Today I making a video about verb. here must short video about verb in my daily life.

Peace Park Poems

The field like a bed for sleep
and the sky like pack of cotton
The wind come with fresh air
we can see the rainbow after the rain 

There is many Chinese statue
They could talk in the midnight
They also play with the giant bell
But a security looking like a hunter

The bee always looking at the flower
Because the flower has many color
Red, orange, yellow, green
It's make the bee so expensive

So much depends Poems

 Hi,
Now we are making an poems. first in the class we are reading the poems written by William Carlos William and his famous poems call the The Red wheel barrow here my So much depend poems.

So much depends upon
The sun

To make people happy
To help people go outside.

  by NASA's Marshall Space Flight Center

So much depends upon
The clothes
To make people not cold
 Like an armor who cover everything.

So much depends upon
The shoes
To help people flying
To cover people from cloud.

by j l t

Poems

Blue car Poems
 
When we are learning poetry we read the book name love that dog in that book there was a poetry call blue car. I think i like this blue car poetry especially the rhythm because the rhythm is always 7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7 and a-b-a-b. also I like the rhythm because this rhythm like a hip-hop music.
Here is my Blue car Poems.



Blue-Car Poems by Rafi85


Fast-Food Poems

After we learn  about the blue car we start to make our own poems. First I think to make own poems is quietly hard but i get the idea from fast food that if we always eat that everyday it bad for you own health. So I make this Poems
Here is my Fast-food Poems



Fast-food Poems by Rafi85