Fixing my inquirer post

A few month ago I make a post about inquiry. but the post has so many mistake, here the post.

I was curios about how internet has invented. because I'm thinking how big Internet be, like they can access to billion people around the world. I've been curios since i am 10 years old, the internet make me interesting because internet have many application for the people around the world. it have (Skype, Facebook, Twiter, etc).
I have been curious about the Internet because I am confuse how internet can feed billion of application but people can access that application in the same time. I also curios about how the application can save all the information/the document, did they have an building to save the documents? did ?did the Internet use an cable to connect all the information around the world?
my effort to know is by doing research in the internet to found how Internet has been invented, or I found in the article.

Now after six month I learn about grammar I fix the post and I make this movie.

this is the post after I fix it.

I was curious about how Internet has invented. I'm thinking how big Internet be. People can access to other people around the world. I've been curious since I am 10 years old, the Internet make me interesting because Internet has many applications for the people around the world. It consists of  (Skype, Facebook, Twiter, etc).

I have been curious about the Internet because I am confuse how internet can feed billion of application, but people can access that application in the same time. I also curios about how the application can save the entire information. Did they have a building to save the documents? Did? Did the Internet use a cable to connect all the information around the world?

My effort to know is by doing research in the Internet to found how Internet has been invented, or I found in the article.