The field like a bed for sleep
and the sky like pack of cotton
The wind come with fresh air
we can see the rainbow after the rain
There is many Chinese statue
They could talk in the midnight
They also play with the giant bell
But a security looking like a hunter
The bee always looking at the flower
Because the flower has many color
Red, orange, yellow, green
It's make the bee so expensive
Rafi, I really like the second poem that you write, it's like you really making an imagination about the Chinese statue and they could talk in the midnight and play with the giant bell. I think it's really good. Keep writing poem with your amazing imagination!.
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